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所有積分大於負-100的壞孩子,將可獲得重新機會成為懲罰生,權限跟幼兒生一樣。
Hi babe, It’s our first Valentines day and I just wan to say I love you so much. I'm writing this in English, because I’ve found that you are such an idiot Chinese reader and we’re here in US to learn English, so that it is better to write in English. I was so upset in the last few weeks. Even we argued, we fought, but it always ended up nothing. My heart broke a little bit when I looked at your face while you were hitting me. I wan to hit you back at that time but I was controlling myself hardly . I was so scare. I felt I seem walking on eggshells all the time. I knew that my fault made you change into another person, due to what I had done on you before. I admitted I always hid all the sadness in my heart deeply without telling you everything, that just because I never trusted on you. I thought all these sadness would pass on when time flying, but I just realized it didn't work eventually.
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Keeping a habit of reading English isn't an easy thing to do. However, there are still some methods to help you do that.   In reality, you natually do things that you are interested in, which works the same way for building a habit of reading English.
I would suggest you to start with reading fiction books. You should choose books that suit your English level in order to avoid feeling frustrated at the very beginning of your reading journey.
Besides reading fiction books, a very good way to learn English is online (or on the internet).
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Some suggestions from my friend on learning English,

Well done for wanting to improve on your English dear friend. However, I feel I am not qualified to point you to the appropriate direction to learn English in the most constructive and effective way. However, I am eager to help you the best I can. So here goes:
1. As with learning a new language from my personal experience, it is essential to expand on your vocabulary in order to express yourself effectively, positively and constructively.
2. Make mistakes, I mean make lots of mistakes in order to learn. This is the first step to learning anything new.
3. Read anything that interests you whatever they are. There are no limits to learning. If you are bored with what you are reading, the brain will never soak in the information.
4. Look up the meaning of new words from dictionary and if you are still uncertain then ask a friend to explain the meaning of the new word to you. Then make up a sentence with this new word and ask other people how they would use the new word.
5. Track your progress and keep moving forward, however slow it may be.
6. Include as many adjectives and verbs into your sentences as you possibly can in order to attract people to read what you are writing.
7. Learn about the past, present and future tense in English.
8. Make it a habit to talk in English as much as possible too even if it is into your phone and record it so you can listen to your progress. I wish you all the best and let me know if and when you need anymore tips, advice and help. 
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Some suggestions from my friend on learning English,

I have no opinion to give you but I will share to you the way I learned English.
I started my learning English by music, look at carefully sentence by sentence in a song I like. And choose the sentence I like best and keep it in notebook (which these I will used later)...
And I think if you want to improve your writing's skill, the most important thing is you must learning vocabulary (as much as possible)
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本帖最後由 love0201 於 2015-2-11 11:04 AM 編輯
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The main purpose I post here, is for learning English.
I said "I also want earn some credits for d ...
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i agree your point that keeps using English to improve it, however, you should do proof reading bef ...

Thank you for your suggestion.
The problem is if I find something wrong.
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love0201 well, you need to read through more carefully. I also notice that your sentences are constructed using mandarin grammar, which is really hard for native speakers to understand what you trying to say.  發表於 2015-2-11 11:21 AM
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I can see that you already have the ability to express yourself in English. So to improve more, I would suggest that you go back to the basic grammar and just learn the 5 basic sentence forms,  SV, SVC, SVO, SVOC and SVOO. When you construct your sentences, just think about these 5 forms and I'm sure your writing will improve tremendously. Anyway, it works for me.

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thats pretty useful

through things recording

can find many little details

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I can see that you already have the ability to express yourself in English. So to improve more, I wo ...

Thank you for your sharing, indeed.
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分享使你變得更實在,可以使其他人感到快樂,分享是我們的動力。今天就來分享你的資訊、圖片或檔案吧。
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thats pretty useful

through things recording

Recording can't help me to find out the mistakes when I am looking back.





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the 5 basic sentence forms,
1. Subject/Verb
Edward laughed.
The baby crawls and coos.
Spring rain and flowers abound.

2. Subject/Verb/Direct Object
Margaret recalled a memory.
Susan shovels snow.
President Obama gave a speech.

3. Subject/Verb/Complement
The consultant seemed pleasant.
All applicants were UM graduates.
Our house is sturdy.
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Thinking in English should be a best way to learn English. The advantage includes you would not feel embarrassing when you make some mistakes, and feel stress to speak out.
At very beginning, you can start to do it after reading a article, or after watching a movie. You could rethink the detail in your brain by English.
One thing you should remember in mind, don't force yourself too much. It would be nice, if you can do it in the relaxing mood.
The important thing is to do it constantly, day after day, time would help you get used it, and you would get the benefit from thinking in English....
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所有積分大於負-100的壞孩子,將可獲得重新機會成為懲罰生,權限跟幼兒生一樣。
Thanks for the sharing and the discussion. Hope we can keep this good habit for a considerable time, cheers.

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本帖最後由 13F 於 2015-2-11 11:29 PM 編輯

I'd suggest that you write some other interesting subjects like sport, music, hobby
here, then someone may join the discussion.

Additional suggestion,
I have read above posted, and to me it's very important that writing correctly
because I often reply to forgein customer's questions at my work.
I know I'm not good in English, so I always check my mail very carefully over you can image
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